First Draft Feedback

After showing our first draft of our music video to our target audience and our teacher we were given a variety of feedback:

• Firstly both our target audience and teacher both liked the overall layout of the opening and the chorus. They mentioned it "synced well with the rhythm" and "the visuals matched the audio very well"
• One change that they suggested was to cut to the beat more during the verse. The way we had been syncing to the beat wasn't quite as sophisticated as it could be and instead of cutting to every other beat, cutting every beat would really add more quality to the editing and the overall video.  
• Another point they made was to not show all the locations and shots right at the beginning. Leave some of the shots unknown till the second verse and the chorus, as it would keep the audience interested till the end.
• Lastly some of the target audience have mentioned that the opening is a bit too long and recommend that we shorten it to get to the song much quicker.